Hey there! This is Chapter 3 after Chapter 2. I’ve forgotten to post more after a while and I didn’t think it would catch on. I also (embarrassingly) alternated between first and third person view for Chapter 2, so if you’ve already read it, read it again because I just edited it. Well, here is Chapter 3!
Gli had been flying for hours. When she had just now learned how to fly, she couldn’t celebrate because of the urgency to find Frisa. It was exhausting. Being a descendant of a Mist dragon, she had powerful wings. Mist dragons had strong and giant wings.
Gli had many problems. She didn’t even know who Frisa (fry-za) was. She didn’t know what kind of threat the Sword-Soldiers were. She didn’t know what to do! Her mom hadn’t even give her that much food! And her glow-fly in the flashlight had died.
The flashlight contained a little glow-fly in it. If you dropped something in it, it would alarm the glow-fly and it would shine. The glow-fly literally got spooked about anything. You had to feed it grass and it only lived for a week. Then you had to find a new one. Glow-flies only appeared right after sunset and only for ten minutes before they went into their burrows again. Luckily, the glow-flies’ habitat was only “after sunset”, which meant they didn’t have a natural habitat.
Gli found a nice, untouched cave that seemed like a great place to rest. Unfortunately, she couldn’t breathe fire to make one to keep her warm. Mist and Leaf dragons didn’t breathe fire, so there was no doubt that Gli could breathe fire.
Gli was cold and hungry. The cave was dark and wet. She felt sad and tired. Gli wrapped her wings around her for warmth and went to sleep.
The loud sound of rain woke Gli up. Having the blood of a Mist dragon, Gli should have found rain beautiful and even possibly control it. Even the Leaf dragons enjoyed it. But Gli did not. She didn’t even like getting wet. Whenever she got wet, it got under her scales and even when she dried out, she felt stinky and sticky, so she had the Bug dragons command ants to clean out underneath her scales. Then it took a week to properly go back to normal.
Gli was soaked and so was her sack. She hadn’t slept well at all. She wasn’t used to the hard cave floors. She decided to help herself to mouthful of food and then head off to the nearest village. But when she looked in her sack, baitews (by-twos) were eating her food and medicine. They even ate the wing gel and water; wing gel treated sore wings. All she had left was a knife, but that was no use. The baitews must have brought back her supplies to their queen. Baitews were scavenger bugs and they didn’t go very far away from their hive. Baitews could eat a giant meal the size of a dragon in an hour. They were smaller than a claw but they had dangerous and venomous mandibles. A single bite could put a dragon in a coma, while more than four could kill one. Any who got bit by a baitew got very sick after the coma and could die of that, too. There was about two thousand in her sack. Even though baitews weren’t aggressive, they were easily spooked like a glow-fly and attacked.
Gli was freaking out. She decided it wasn’t worth getting a venomous bite just for some useless, blunt knife. She could use her sharp claws and teeth besides. Then she realized the her mom had pack the money in there! If she showed up at the village without money, she wouldn’t be able to get anything. She wouldn’t be able to pay for a room at an inn, she couldn’t buy any food, and she wouldn’t be able to buy new supplies.
She just had to get that money back. She would risk everything her life. Her family was counting on her. Gli thrust her talon into the sack. She grabbed three pieces of money and had gotten bit twice, only. She still had a little bit of time before the coma struck.
She flew faster then she ever did before to the Goti Village. She had heard the doctors were kind there and sometimes helped patients for free. Gli began to get lightheaded as she saw the village.
Wait, is that what she saw? A giant tree!
Gli was so lightheaded that she fainted as she was diving straight into the Goti Village.
Thatβs a good chapter! Great original ideas!
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thx!
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And Iβm working on chapter eight of mine.
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ooh!
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ill write that part you’ll hate me for in chapter ten I think. hehehehehehe >:3
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is it posted?
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Not yet. Iβll try to get it up today, but if not it should be up tomorrow. Maybe check back later today. It should be almost done though. You may not have to wait long
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oh ok. also i just wanted to say that i like the story so far and your doing a good job with it
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Thank you! I think chapter nine will have Undoing giving a true back story. How he got his power and stuff. I think itβll be cool.
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ooooooooooooooooooooh
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I have a feeling itβll be posted today
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I hope so
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Itβs uploaded!
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Let me know what you think! ^-^
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yay
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Honestly, my fanfic is the farthest I written any book. I donβt normally make it this far… yet I want to be an author.
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ikr
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XD
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I started chapter nine today and right now, i’m drawing Queen Ruby with Prince Cliff.
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gosh, Cliff was hard to draw. he’s so small! glad he’s done. but wait till I have to color him. i’ll need really sharp colored pencils fo that.
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yikes
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(Clayβs theme is stuck in my head, too)
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The paragraph where Undoing tells his life story is SOOO long!! Sorry in advance if itβs boring XD
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its fine
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Okie. (Why is Clayβs theme so catchy!?)
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Have you read WoF fourth graphic novel?
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307 words for Undoingβs βspeechβ. Wow
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nice
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By the way, chapter nine is going nicely. Iβm hoping to post it today
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yay
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hey is nine posted yet?
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Yes it is!
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hooray can u give me the link plz
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Letβs see if I remember how to copy links
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WHAT you forgot how to copy links?!?!?! XD XD LOL
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I donβt know how to do it on my phone. Just the computer, and I donβt have access right how. ;-;β
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oh. just double tap it then click copy then double tap the space where u want to paste it
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i THINK i dont have my own phone
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I think that did it!
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yay!
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Lemme know what you think! ^-^
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sure thing! also i’ll send a request on the way
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A request? What kind of request?
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picture request like the ones u do
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When writing a chapter, do you think about what to write, write it, then think some more? Or do you just write, and go where the writing takes you, and not think much at all?
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usually it starts off with the first question and i write all my ideas that i have no more left so then i lean over to the second one
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Huh. I just write and wherever it goes is where itβll go.
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Ugggg! Cliffhanger! I wannnt mooore!
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sorry! im working on chapter 4
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